Mitch, the two items I see that could potentially cause mandatory revisions...
Whomever you get to print them will have what's called a "Live Area" which is
smaller than the "Trim line" (which is where they actually cut) and then, obviously
the "bleed" outside the Trim line. Your live area is the area beyond which you can't
have any copy. They do this to protect from cutting info off when things "shift" in
the press or cutter. Your design looks like it may be pushing the limits of said
"Live Area" (although that measurement is based on the quality of the printer)
The QR code may be too small to scan at that size, IIRC they require at least
a .25" square for most software to be able to scan it...it may be .5"
I have all those graphic elements and that font (minus the bean/bullet) so once
you find a printer, if you need help adhering to the Mechanical Requirements set
forth by them, just let me know and I can help with the final layouts.